Comic 229 - 22.91

11th Mar 2014, 5:08 PM in 22. The Fourth Gathering
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Matt Knab 11th Mar 2014, 5:09 PM edit delete
Matt Knab
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Whoa, what?? o.O

Just a quick feedback--that word bubble "As much so as any one person..." is kind of tough to read. It took a couple a couple read throughs to figure out where the pauses were suppose to be. I think it was the "so" that threw me off.
Matt Knab
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, that definitely sounds better out loud than it looks written down. Should probably just be "as ready as any one person can be". Gah, also missed a period there while typing. Will fix it tonight!
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